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Ben 10 Alien Force: FanFiction
Episode Six

( ) = voice tone
{ } = action

Scene: If you don't know, go read the end of episode 5.

Ken: {sees Kevin and Gwen} --Oh. Whoops. S-Sorry, sis. Didn’t mean to interrupt.
Gwen: (freaked out) Ken!
Ken: {avoids looking at Gwen and Kevin by randomly looking around the room} All righty then. I'm just... you know...
Gwen: Ken...
Ken: {speaking too fast} I'llbedownstairs.Bye. {leaves}
Gwen: {gets off Kevin} Oh, that was bad.
Kevin: {shrugs} It might not have been the homecoming he expected, but it wasn't like we were doing anything.
Gwen: {stands up} Still. He thought there was something happening, when there wasn't... and somehow, that seems to make things worse. {leaves}
Kevin: {follows Gwen downstairs}
{the two of them find Ken in the kitchen. he cleaned up the broken vase and the water and is now getting himself a soda}
Gwen: Um, Ken...
Ken: {looks up} H-e-l-l-o...
Gwen: Ken--
Kevin: {interrupting} Look man, nothing happened. I stole her Journal and she fell trying to get it back. That's all.
Ken: {pops open his soda} {shrugs} Okay.
Gwen: (surprised) 'Okay'?
Ken: {nods} Okay. Doesn't bother me either way. I was just surprised, I guess.
Kevin: {folds his arms} I honestly don't know if I want to hit this guy so hard no plastic surgery could save his face... or if I want to shake his hand...
Gwen: It doesn't matter what you want to do. You're not hitting my brother.
Kevin: Eh. Fair enough.
Ken: (mumbles) I see who wears the pants in this relationship. {sips his soda}
Kevin: {frowns} Are you lookin' for that first option?
Ken: No.
Gwen: Kevin! Stop threatening my brother!
Kevin: {emotionless} Okay. Fine. I'll go. {leaves} {the front door slams}
Ken: {points to the door} You should go after that.
Gwen: {hesitates} {runs out the door} {grabs the driver's door just as Kevin is getting in}
Kevin: Yes?
Gwen: Why are you mad at my brother?
Kevin: {shrugs} Honestly... I have no idea.
Gwen: You're never honest.
Kevin: {frowns} Because he irritates me.
Gwen: You irritate me sometimes. It doesn't mean I go around threatening you every chance I get.
Kevin: That is completely different.
Gwen: {nibbles on her lip} True. Because unlike me, you can't do this when you're irritated with my brother... {kisses him} {pretty long kiss, too} {then she pulls away}
Kevin: {smiles} I don't really understand. Maybe you could show me that last part again?
Gwen: No. You were leaving if I remember correctly.
Kevin: {raises and eyebrow} Then I won't leave. We can go on the roof. I always get kissed on the roof.
Gwen: No. Bye, Kevin. {starts walking back to the house}
Kevin: {hops out of the car} {stands leaning on the open driver's door} Lame.
Gwen: {stops} {turns around} What?
Kevin: {grins} Lame... Lame... Lame... Lame...
Gwen: {rolls her eyes} {smiles while shaking her head} {blows him a kiss}
Kevin: {places a hand over his heart} Lame!
Gwen: {turn and walks back to the house} {over her shoulder} Good-bye Kevin!
Kevin: {gets in the car}

Scene: After Dinner at the Yamamoto's house. Kevin is waiting for Ben, leaning against his car, parked on the street. Julie's mom and dad are watching Julie and Ben say goodnight bye the mailbox.

Ben: {looking past Julie's shoulder} They're watching me... I feel like they're inviting me to do something wrong.
Julie: {rolls her eyes} {turns to her parents} Kan temae arankagiri tachisaru, nanitozo? Temae zousaku Ben sowasowa.
Julie's Dad: Hon'in iiya shinpyou ketsu gyaruson!
Julie's Mom: {smiles} {to Julie} Chin mune tachisaru. {waves at Ben} Good-bye Ben!
Ben: {waves} Uh, yeah, bye!
{mom and dad go inside}
Ben: You speak really fluent Japanese.
Julie: Yeah, well. I should go.
Ben: Right. Well-
Julie: {kisses him} Bye, Ben.
Ben: Uh, huh, bu-bye.
Julie: {giggles} {turns and goes back to the house}
Kevin: Come on lover-boy. I want to get home sometime this millennium.
Ben: {turns to Kevin} Good day. Huh?
Kevin: {nods} Yeah. Very good day. For the both of us.
Ben: {getting in the car} Oh really? What happened to you?
Kevin: {in the car} Nothing of consequence.
Ben: Aha! So something did happen.
Kevin: Wha- How- What?
Ben: You use big words when you're in a good mood.
Kevin: Do I really?
Ben: Mmm... Hmm...
Kevin: Sorta like how Gwen acts like you when she's mad.
Ben: Yup.
Kevin: All right Tennison, since you know everything... I have a question for you.
Ben: Shoot.
Kevin: Hypothetically speaking... if you kiss a girl... does that automatically make her... your girlfriend?
Ben: I know what you're getting at...
Kevin: Y-You do?
Ben: {nods} Me and Julie. Don't worry about it though... Julie asked me to be her boyfriend after you and Gwen left us at the school this afternoon.
Kevin: {sighs} You got me, Ben. {sarcasm} You are a brilliant person.
{Ben's cell phone rings}
Ben: It's Gwen. {answers it} Hello?
Gwen: {on the other line} Ben!? You need to get over here, quickly!
Ben: Gwen, slow down, what's wrong?
Kevin: {raises an eyebrow}
Gwen: I can't talk right now! {to someone else} Kevin! Put that down!
Ben: {eyes Kevin curiously}
Gwen: {to Ben} Seriously, just get over here! {hangs up}
Ben: {putting the phone away} Step on it.
Kevin: If you insist. {speeds} {screeching tires}
Original:
Julie: {rolls her eyes} {turns to her parents} Kan temae arankagiri tachisaru, nanitozo? Temae zousaku Ben sowasowa.
Julie's Dad: Hon'in iiya shinpyou ketsu gyaruson!
Julie's Mom: {smiles} {to Julie} Chin mune tachisaru. {waves at Ben} Good-bye Ben!

Translation:
Julie: {rolls her eyes} {turns to her parents} Can you please go inside? You're making Ben nervous.
Julie's Dad: I don't trust that boy!
Julie's Mom: {smiles} {to Julie} We will go. {waves at Ben} Good-bye Ben!

~~~

Yeah, I don't know if she actually does speak Japanese, but her last name is Japanese, so I got creative.

Hope you like it.
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Glindathegood041592's avatar
my favorite line had to be kevin " I honestly don't know if I want to hit this guy so hard no plastic surgery could save his face... or if I want to shake his hand..." That was like classice Kevin...i love this